poniedziałek, 4 kwietnia 2011

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Anonimowy pisze...

1 Napisz opowiadanie rozpoczynające się słowami 'My plan seemed perfect' które zostanie zamieszczone w anglojęzycznej gazetce twojej szkoły.

My plan seemed perfect. When I was leaving Cuba and stepped on the board of ferry I thought that it's gonna be my dream life in the USA. With my friend Manny we escaped the Cuban revolution and the new Castro's world.
From the beginning when I landed in the world of opportunities I started from being a cook. I didn't like it. I thought that with my experience in being gangster with balls I need to be someone bigger. So I started to work for Mr Frank Lopez. He had beautiful wife Elvira but he didn't have balls to put these all things together. I falled in love with her and I realised
after the action when I had killed my assasins who had tried to kill me that Lopez is now my enemy. I killed him, persuaded his wife to be my wife and tried to help my sister Gina. But then my problems began. I started to become addicted to cocaine which I had been snorting for all this time. My mind went blank. I didn't wanna see my my best friend Manny who was touching my lovely sister and I made the biggest mistake in my life - I killed him.
Now I'm waiting for Sosa's soldiers who will come to get me in my villa. But you know what? You're playing with the best Sosa. Your turkeys will say 'hello' to my little friend. Time to end up this story. Time to bury those cockroaches!


podaje adres e-mail: piotrsa@poczta.onet.pl i proszę o podanie wyniku. Piotrek S. A10

Anonimowy pisze...

Napisz opowiadanie rozpoczynające się od słów ‘I had been studying for this test for two weeks.’




I had been studying for this test for two weeks. The principal had told me that if I don’t pass this test I’ll be expelled from school not only because of my final marks but also of my behaviour.

I had been learning for this test by heart. I don’t have good head for figures so I was really stressed about this maths test. The final day came. How fool I was to think that I will be writting it. Mr Nowacka changed her mind and she told me that she will just give me a few questions and one simple exercise to do on the board. When she started giving me questions my mind went blank. ‘So... What is the answer?’- she asked. ‘I had this on the tip of my tongue but..’ – I mumbled. This was not the right combination of words for her. She yelled at me and said that I didn’t learn it and I failed it. I was crying but when I checked my phone I realised that by mistake I had recorded this conversation. I showed it my principal and he said that it was’t fair what she had done for me and he gave me the second chance.
Without Mr Nowacka in the classroom I passed this test with flying colours and I’m still in school. And she’s gonna have a nice conversation with principal. From now on I will be learning harder.

Piotrek S